Wednesday, March 24, 2010

i dream a world

im doin i dream a world
1.
there are moral boundaries along with racial boundaries.
2.
there is personal writing like "i dream a world where man no other man will scorn"
and repitition to make a clear statement.

lines written in early spring

1.
there are emotional and spiritual boundaries
2.
the techniques used are pun and persona

she knows no boudaries

1.the boundaries in this poem are emotional, moral and spiritual boundaries

2.there are subjective language like "i have tried to"
and there are personal like "i lived in a village raised the children"

Sunday, February 28, 2010

Feedback on Posts

WOW!! You guys have been busy!! There are nearly 50 posts from this class. I have enjoyed reading them.

Please remember to use full sentence and paragraph structure. Eg. Don't just say that repetition is used, give me an example and tell me WHY.

Mr Edmonds

Sunday, February 21, 2010

She knows no boundaries

1. Some of the boundaries in this poem are Emotional, Spiritual and Moral boundaries.
2. I have tried to . . .
Learn something new everyday.
This is an example of subjective language used in the poem.

I have lived by the rules of . . .
Treating others as i want to be treated.
This is an example of personal language used in the poem.